Вопрос The most attractive holiday

The most attractive holiday in my opinion is Easter. It is a very ancient and important Christian holiday for our country. It is great fun to paint boiled eggs in different colors and then exchange Easter eggs. Special dishes such as Easter cakes are prepared on this day, too.  But the greatest fun is to spend this holiday with your family and relatives. That's why I love Easter. What about you? Do you share my interest? What is your favorite holiday? Why?

In my opinion New Year's Day is the most attractive holiday, because houses, streets and towns are decorated by people, who go shopping to buy presents for their relatives and friends. People take much money out of cash-machines, because some presents are really expensive. New Year's decorations are very popular, too. That is why this holiday is the first largest card-sending holiday of the year according to the statistics.

In my opinion, the most attractive holiday is Summer Bank Holiday. Summer Bank Holiday is a public holiday in 4 countries, where it is a day off for the general population common people, and schools and most businesses offices are closed. For many people, the summer bank holiday marks the end of the summer. For others, it is another opportunity to work in their gardens. In London the Notting Hill Carnival is held. This street festival is best known for its costumes, dancing and music. It is thought to be the second largest street carnival in the world. I really want to visit this festival, because i want to see it with my own eyes!
Вау! Софья, мне понравилось твое сообщение! Оно было лаконично, но содержало много полезных речевых клише. Я их выделила жирным шрифтом. Спасибо! Несомненно, оно принесет пользу тем, кто его будет читать.

In my opinion the most attractive holiday is Christmas. Christmas is celebrated on 25 December and it is one of the most important and famous holidays in Britain.Christmas is a family holiday that is why in the UK families often celebrate Christmas together with the whole family. Most families have a Christmas tree in their houses. The decorating of the tree is usually a family occasion, with everyone helping. Villages, towns and cities are decorated with Christmas lights over Christmas. The most famous Christmas lights in the UK are in Oxford street in London. Every year they get bigger and better. Christmas dinner is usually eaten at in the early afternoon. It usually includes roast turkey, vegetables and potatoes. For a dessert there is a rich, fruity cake called Christmas pudding. It is very common to send Christmas cards to friends, family and  classmates in the week before 25 December. Christmas is traditionally a time for helping other people and giving money for to charitiesy. I think that everyone should visit the UK at this time of the year.
Спасибо, Александра за твое сообщение! Сообщение - интересное и хорошее, но есть рекомендации.
Курсивом я выделила в твоем сообщении фразы, которые мы не еще не изучали в школьном курсе и поэтому они нежелательны, т.к.:
- непонятны (скороее всего)  читающим твое сообщение одноклассникам и
- не согласуются с целью написания нами постов на форуме: отработать в речи изучаемые в данном параграфе учебника темы.
Ты, наверное,  не очень невнимательно прочитала мое стартовое сообщение и поэтому не использовала ключевые фразы 
- friends and relatives are invited
- presents are given
- special meals or dishes are cooked
- houses, streets, towns and cities are decorated
- fireworks are displayed / let off
- jokes on people are played
- parades  are watched
но использовала cards are sent (поэтому данные слова в твоем сообщении я выделила жирным шрифтом, так же как и другие, уже изученные нами в предыдущих уроках по теме "Праздники").

In my opinion the most attractive holiday is Christmas,  because houses, streets and towns are decorated by people. This holiday is celebrated together with family. Special dishes such as roast goose  are prepared on this day. Christmas decorations are very popular, too. That's why I love Christmas .

The most attractive holiday for me is Late Summer Bank Holiday.Late Summer Bank Holidayis a bank holiday from 1971. It Replaced the last Monday in August.The Summer Bank Holiday was introduced in the Bank Holidays Act of 1871, it was also first observed in that year. It was originally used to give bank workers the chance to participate in and attend cricket matches. The Summer Bank Holiday is a holiday that for many which reminds about marks the end of Summer. During the three-day weekend many people take short trips or holidays, visiting their familyies and friends in different parts of the country.I like this holiday because it gives an additional opportunity to be with my family and friends.But we don't have such a holiday in our country!

In my opinion the most attractive holiday is Boxing Day. Boxing Day is a bank holiday. People celebrate Boxing Day on 26 December after Christmas day. In the UK this is one of eight official holidays. People celebrate this holiday in England, New Zealand, Australia and  Canada. On this day presents are given to best friends and relatives.  This holiday is a day to spend time with your  family and friends. It is difficult to imagine a person who does not like presents and weekends. I think Boxing Day is a holiday to bring people together. I would like to have such a holiday in our country. 
Thank you for your idea to have one more day off in our country. May be it would be good to compare this holiday with the traditions of our country. The post is good but you haven't used a lot of Passive Voice in it.

In my opinion the most attractive holiday is New Year's Day. New Year's Day is celebrated on 1 Jаnuary. In England, Wales and Nothern Ireland It is a bank holiday, which means that banks, government offices and most business centres are closed on these is day. But in Scotland New Year's Day is a public holiday, where it is a day off for  people. People see in the New Year with their friend, families and relatives, with a lot of enthusiasm, new hopes and new wishes. They have New Year's Eve dinner, where special meals or dishes are cooked by the  master of the  house. In the UK also many pubs, caffes and restaurants have special events.On New Year's Day people make New Year's Resolutions, promise to start doing something good in the New Year, for example to care about parents, to lose weight, to become more organised, to learn something new. I think it is a nice tradition. A few minutes before midnight, British people traditionally watch Big Ben on the TV and celebrate after it strikes for the 12th time. But many people often gather in the area around Piccadilly Cirсus and Trafalgar Square from about 9 pm to listen to Big Ben and watch firework display at London Eye starting at midnight.Also on this day houses, streets, towns and cities are decorated with lights, it looks fantastic. I think that everyone should visit the UK on this holiday.
Thank you,  that you told us about the tradition to celebrate New Year in The UK. It'll be nice to understand why this holiday is so attractive to you.  What do you like most?

In my opinion, the most attractive holiday is Spring Bank Holiday. Spring Bank Holiday is celebrated on the last Monday in May. This holiday was replaced White Monday, which used to be a public holiday in 1871. On this day on the streets   costume festivals with flovwers and exhibitions was are held costume festivals with flovwers and exhibitions. This day is also called the festival of flovwers, because on this day all streets in the UK are decorated with garlands of flowers. 
    I like this holiday and I really want to visit this festival!
It's good that you are interested in British Holidays. you have used Passive constructions in your text but not very much. Thank you for your post.