Вопрос The most attractive holiday

The most attractive holiday for me is Saint Andrew's Day. Now it is a national festival. Saint Andrew's Day marks the beginning of the traditional advent devotion of the Saint Andrew Christmas Novena (переделай в знакомые, изученные нами слова). In Scotland and many countries with Scottish connections ???? _{(ну, это уже похоже на цитату из чужого источника)}, Saint Andrew's Day is marked with a celebration of Scottish culture with traditional Scottish food, music and dance. All Scots cooked special meals or dishes. I love this holiday because i want to visit ( ??? нанести визит?)  it myself.
Have you ever been there? Really? You are joking .... 
^{Мне кажется, ты могла развить эту тему творчески, трансформируя материал из используемого тобой источника в изученные нами речевые фразы.
Возможно, ты не прочитала правила этой ветки форума, скорее всего,
даже не читала мои критические сообщения к уже написанным до тебя сообщениям твоих одноклассников и поэтому не стала учиться на их ошибках.. 
У тебя нет обсуждения тобой текста учебника (он же размежен в закладке 8-46 1-изучение). Данная ветка посвящена обсуждению именно этого текста. Если ты хотела поговорить о  Saint Andrew's Day, то надо было сравнивать его с описанными в учебнике праздниками, все равно  употребляя лексику именно этого урока, а не материала из Интернет.}

In my opinion the most attractive holiday is St. Patrick’s Day. It is a bank and public holiday. St. Patrick’s Day is celebrated every year on 17 March. Traditional activities include dressing up in green clothes, holding parades,  singing and dancing in the streets, going to pubs, organizing fairs and festivals. As it’s a religious holiday, many people in Ireland attend (mass) не изучали churches (изучали) for saying prayers (to pray). Green is the official colour of St. Patrick’s Day. That’s why on this day people try to wear something green. They also paint green stripes on the city streets. Another symbol of St. Patrick’s Day is the shamrock. This holiday is celebrated in Ireland , Russia , Canada , the the USA and in Japan. I  visited (навещала?)  took part in celebration of  this holiday and it was really cool. I really want  to visit this holiday do it again!
Спасибо! Интересное сообщение!
Did you really take part in this celebration? When did it take place? How did it happen that you celebrated this holiday?

In my opinion the most attractive holiday is Good Friday, because this is the day of sorrow on the eve of Easter Sunday.This holiday is celebrated together with family.It is also believed that the bun, soaked in milk and baked on Holy Friday, has healing properties.A child born on Good Friday or Easter Sunday is said to be gifted with invulnerability.That's why I love Good Friday.
It's good that you know a lot of information about this holiday . It'll be good if you compare the traditions of celebrating Easter in Britain and Belarus and give your own reasons why you like this day.

In my opinion the most attractive holiday is New Year. New Year is celebrated on 1 January. All people are waiting for this holiday. Many of them believe that all dreams come true on this magical night. For all children the New Year is the best holiday, because Santa Claus will definitely bring a present. On New Year's Even  my mother always cooks delicious dishes. 
Your post is not very informative, you can use more phrases about this holiday and compare your opinion with others from different posts.

Sasha, I agree with you that Christmas is one of the most attractive holidays  but as  for me St. Patric`s  Day is more interesting. St. Patrick`s  Day is cultural and religious holiday,  it is celebrated on 17 March. This date is the date of the death of patron saint of Ireland Saint Patrick. The symbols of St. Patrick`s  Day are  green colour, especially in clothes and a shamrock. Traditional activities include holding parades, fireworks,singing and dancing in the streets, organizing fairs and festivals. Another symbol of St. Patrick`s  Day is Leprechauns. They are little people who wear green clothes and carry the pot of gold. Officially St. Patrick`s  Day is recognized as a bank holiday in Ireland. People all over the world like this holiday.
Thank you for your opinion about the ideas of your friends. It was nice to learn more information about British Holidays. There are not many sentences with Present Passive in your text. it's a pity.